I'm gonna stroll into this like a wet blanket, as I know little of comely waitresses in Williams Lake. My experiences there lean towards homely unfortunately.
Now, as for EE hawking, that's something I am familiar with. If you want a gun to sell there's a few things you should follow:
-Text: Less is more, you're post is too busy and unclear for most to bother reading through. I'd trim it down to a quick bit about the gun, and your price options listed clearly in their own sentence underneath.
-Exclamation marks and attention grabbers work against, not for you. They scream desperate. Avoid rapid edits and price drops, pick a good price, which you have, and stick with it. Again the whole desperate thing, and people will conclude it's overpriced if you're dropping the price and it's not going anywhere.
-Pics should be clear and bright, taken in good natural daylight with a light background if possible.
-Give it time, I've sold many guns two months after initial listing. Guns are very much personal taste items, and it takes time to find a guy with your tastes, who's after your guns sometimes. Unless you're selling cheap boring guns.
-Avoid trying to sell Brownings and TC's

These two have given me more headaches when it's time to sell than any other brands.