#2 letter has problems with switching between “we” and “I”
We refers to the person writing and another person. I refers to a singular person. So who is writing this letter? “We” or “I”?
This is why everyone should write their own letter based off of what these form letters say.
Write your thoughts on an email, a piece of paper, a napkin... use whatever you want, but use your own words.
Example:
In letter #1 there is a paragraph that states “we will donate” and “we will volunteer”, so how many of you are going to donate and volunteer? Everyone of you that sent this letter?
My 2 cents.