Very nice work for a guy who`s not a gunsmith. The machining work was top notch.
However, cutting the forcing cone with a boring bar instead of the required reamer is a big no-no, and then not using the correct forcing cone depth gauge to know how deep to stop cutting.
The other mistake can be easily corrected, the cylinder gap is way too narrow. At .0015 and even at .003, the cylinder will start sticking after firing a few dozen wadcutter lead rounds. It needs to be cut to about .0065", but anything between .006" and .007" is OK, with .005 being the absolute minimum. The kit to do all this work is readily available from Brownell`s.